Immortalised.net // Site Review #2

Site Review #2

Score: 4 out of 5 (80%)
Reviewed by: Snowman
Reviewing: Version 1
Recieved on: 3rd October 2002
My Comments: Lots of criticism. Obidasin is my friend and its cool how she doesn't sugar-coat regardless of who knows her. Lots of practical help, though most of the stuff she mentions is now offline. One of the most helpful reviews recieved.

Code: 3/5. So close to a four on coding but the 11 errors I got when using the ever nifty validator brought the page down. Again, since there was no doctype, I used HTML 4.01 Transitional as the basis for the testing. All in all, the coding practices are pretty good. Of course they should be since I'm sure Belinda doesn't use a WYSIWYG editor. The code was still a bit sloppy, but much easier to read than most code.

Organization: 5/5. Unless you've been beating your head against a wall all day, you can navigate this site. There really isn't any guessing involved with the links. The layout is clean and simple. Nothing overly complicated to make you forget where the hell anything is. For the awards and gift art given, the page layout seems a bit bland. Maybe make a nifty little table with the info and put some lines or alt row color in there.

Content: 4/5. There seem to be quite a few grammar errors throughout Imortalised.net. I pointed out a few, but I'm not going to list them all. Under Movie Review: 40 days/nights, if this is your first "guy flick" then you haven't been watching enough porn. (I know, my joke was lame. So sue me.)

F.A.Q.s

if you seriously want me to make a layout for me
if you seriously want me to make a layout for you

Rants:

Trends

Blogs that aren't interesting in the first place is more ...
Blogs that aren't interesting in the first place are more ...

If you think sticky caps are bad, you should see 1337 speak! 17'5 50 3xc171n9 70 r34d s7uff l1k3 7h1s! (It's so exciting to read stuff like this!) Squall just sucks. They only cool thing about him is his gunblade, seed, and cadet uniforms. Those where all cool. Squall himself was just a jerk. Well, you know what they say "Plagiarism is the sincerest form of theft".

Asian Pride

... many Asians get defensive when people ask about they nationality.
... many Asians get defensive when people ask about their nationality.

Isn't Asian Pride the same thing as racism. Thinking you're better than other races and that you're so far above them, that you shouldn't even be associated with them.

Art Rant

However, this is begun to be misused.
However, this has begun to be misused. or However, this is being misused.
Visitors that don't like you site leaves.
Visitors that don't like your site leave.
It's not.
It won't.

"They become lazy and don't update for months, they turn bitchy in their ramblings, etc." Hey it looks like I'm ready to be an "elite" ... I just need the vast hoard of visitors.

Tutorials: CSS

If you want the sample link to work with the code you gave, you need to do a little editing to your css file. Change the HTML to: <span class="fake"><a href="http://">this link</a></span>
Add the following to your CSS file:
.fake a:link { color: #808080; background-color: transparent; text-decoration: none; }
.fake a:hover { color: silver; background-color: transparent; text-decoration: overline underline; }
.fake a:visited { color: grey; background-color: transparent; text-decoration: none; }
I know, I know, extra work. But at least your example will look like the code you have.

CSS Number 3 is a 404 (css3.php). In the Scrollbar Generator, test doesn't work. PHP error. Doesn't look like there is write permission on output.html.

Riddles and Puzzle:
I really, really, really loath riddles. Why? Because I suck at them. I hate puzzles too.

Graphics: 4/5. Wow, the layout is very beautiful. A bit slow, but who cares? It's nice to see a layout that isn't the same old crap. For the award to win, I think 40k is a bit large for an award image. All of the thumbnails are not only small, but are good quality.

Fun: 4/5. Unless you hate reading, I can't really see a reason for hating this site. You should go to this site. Why? Because I said so! And because it's a damn good site to entertain yourself at. Even if it does have evil poetry. This isn't the typical "all about me and every single detail about me you could possible ever know" personal site.